Simplified the sentence about renaming the WPDD if it's changed

"So as to avoid potential confusion..." became "To avoid potential
confusion..."

This begins the work on Discussion Draft #2

diff --git a/wpdd.txt b/wpdd.txt
index cb8d835a781bedfcd05509ea7cccf8cdc7c7368a..bd5715ed923c26fd255920ad79ae95328ac07bf5 100644 (file)
--- a/wpdd.txt
+++ b/wpdd.txt
@@ -1,16 +1,16 @@
 ==== THIS IS A DRAFT. DO NOT USE AS A LICENSE. ====
 
 Worldwide Public Domain Dedication (WPDD)
-Public Discussion Draft #1
+Public Discussion Draft #2
 Please send feedback by email to the public mailing list:
 https://wpdd.info/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/discuss
 
 Copying and distribution of this file, with or without modification, 
 are permitted in any medium without royalty, provided this notice is 
-preserved. So as to avoid potential confusion, if you make 
-modifications please don't call your version the Worldwide Public 
-Domain Dedication (WPDD) or anything else that might be confusingly 
-similar. This file is offered as-is, without any warranty.
+preserved. To avoid potential confusion, if you make modifications 
+please don't call your version the Worldwide Public Domain Dedication 
+(WPDD) or anything else that might be confusingly similar. This file 
+is offered as-is, without any warranty.
 
 Statement of Purpose