From 833a5b5b8861f8868c6c403bf466b974d03bc5e9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jason Self Date: Tue, 20 Sep 2022 05:33:47 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Simplified the sentence about renaming the WPDD if it's changed "So as to avoid potential confusion..." became "To avoid potential confusion..." This begins the work on Discussion Draft #2 --- wpdd.txt | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/wpdd.txt b/wpdd.txt index cb8d835..bd5715e 100644 --- a/wpdd.txt +++ b/wpdd.txt @@ -1,16 +1,16 @@ ==== THIS IS A DRAFT. DO NOT USE AS A LICENSE. ==== Worldwide Public Domain Dedication (WPDD) -Public Discussion Draft #1 +Public Discussion Draft #2 Please send feedback by email to the public mailing list: https://wpdd.info/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/discuss Copying and distribution of this file, with or without modification, are permitted in any medium without royalty, provided this notice is -preserved. So as to avoid potential confusion, if you make -modifications please don't call your version the Worldwide Public -Domain Dedication (WPDD) or anything else that might be confusingly -similar. This file is offered as-is, without any warranty. +preserved. To avoid potential confusion, if you make modifications +please don't call your version the Worldwide Public Domain Dedication +(WPDD) or anything else that might be confusingly similar. This file +is offered as-is, without any warranty. Statement of Purpose -- 2.46.0